100 Word Challenge Week #13
I was 14 years old and I was pretty mischievous. My friends and I where going to the forest near my backyard to explore. We wanted to check out
this abandoned house. Off we went, after 20 minutes we found it, I dared my friend
Jeff to go in funny enough he did. 5 minutes later we heard screaming coming
from the house, Jeff came running out and behind him, WAS A TIGER! All of us
ran but the tiger was faster. I saw my backyard fence but the tiger was
blocking our escape. There was nothing to do, then the tiger slowly treaded
over.
you used some very good words e.g 'mischievous' 'treaded' I think you should find a new word for I
ReplyDeleteI like how your story explained the character
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